Quote: (09-13-2012 09:55 AM)WestCoast Wrote:This is a pretty good beginning to a novel.
I think you're under achieving.
You're not challenging yourself enough. You're living too much in the present. Go to NYC, go to a large metropolis. You want to see boss players they are not in "small town USA". They are in the big leagues.
I'm only Trolling your posts specifically because you could be worth $500K plus by mid thirties. That's gangster money. That's fuck you money. That's money that no one can take from you. That's confidence.
You know how easy rejection is when you know the girl just turned down a man worth half a stick or more? You know how easy it is to not give a shit when some bitch who works at Tiffany's doesn't want to go on a date with you, knowing very well you could buy up all that shit in front of her with cash?
If you want my life story you can give me a call. I had no friends, had to sell drugs and live in a homeless shelter, had major psychological issues.
The funny thing? I have very little friends again. Why? they aren't worth my time
But the character would have to do something besides make a lot of money, fuck models and say FU to everyone; eventually.