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We gamble, I wear my hot dress that makes you happy I'm your girlfriend and not someone else's
That line got me. I also liked the element of surprise with the briefcase in the end. Story telling is one aspect I need to improve. Telling a good story off the cuff is hard, I need to sit down and write one out. I hang out with some great story tellers does 3 things (which I'm sure the article alludes to): 1) provides conversational hooks; 2) builds comfort and connection; 3) expressing yourself intelligently is a dhv