[gringochileno]

Yeah I'm not seeing any explicit mistakes that would have outright killed it. I'm not a fan of facebooking girls unless there's no other option but banging a girl after adding her on facebook can and has been done. I think it's incredible how girls can sense when you're overvaluing them even when you think you're doing a good job of not showing too much interest. There's really no faking it, you have to actually not give a shit.